oh love go (work in progress)- poetry-0-3

I say go, oh love go
Go and show this country what we are fighting for.
I say go, oh love go
know that i love you now and forever more.
Cause I know, that the moon will keep on shining
til the end of time and
i know you have to go.
so i say go



as I watch you put on your uniform
my heart cant help but to feel torn
and it screams,

dont go... love dont go
cause i dont think i cant sleep in our bed alone
dont go, love dont go
without you this house...just wouldn't feel like home
please dont go oh love dont go
And while my heart is breaking
I try to ignore its aching
cause I know, you have to go
so I say go


I say go, oh love go
go and show them what we are made of
I say go, oh love go
know that you will always be my one and only love
Cause I know, that the world will keep on turning
even as my heart is yearning
i know you have to go.
so i say go

Even as you go to leave
my heart starts to heave
and I cry..oh I cry

dont go, love no
even though its what we signed up for
please dont go, love no
I'm just so afraid I wont see you anymore
even though I've go to be strong
i ask, why cant i just go.... along
i know you have to go
but..please dont go

Ceswr wrote:
Cuase I know, that the moon will keep on shining
til the end of time and
i know you have to go.
so i say go

only thing that i noticed was spell check "cuase"
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but chelsea, you already know i love this!

it flows so well, everytime as i read it i end up humming a tune to it.

very beautifully written.

i have nothing but love for it

yeah i put another couple stanzas in, and changed the wording alittle. and i do have a little tune for it in my head and constantly sing it. that why i think i added more lol