Creation by Kio

~ I decided since I haven't really added that much to the site recently so I thought that I would give this a go. Yes this is a weird interpretation xD ~



Kio watched slowly as a head emerged from his beloved Angela. The pressure that Angela was applying to his Kio’s hand was excruciating and was leaving small red marks on his hand. If he wasn’t so happy and energetic at that moment he would have cried out in pain and cringe away from the immensely disgusting sight that was unfolding before him. It was so enthralling to have your first born child.

After the head came an arm and a torso. Finally out came the umbilical cord and the legs. Kio looked at his newborn child and smiled warmly despite the extreme pain in his hand, which had relaxed after the baby surfaced from his wife. The doctor snipped the umbilical cord and handed the baby to Angela. She held it carefully in her hands. Her face looked worn and seemed as if it had aged several years during the last nine months.

Angela cradled the baby carefully and rocked it gently in her arms. Kio looked closer and deemed it a baby girl. She looked so cute and vulnerable as her little pudgy fingers closed and opened and her eyes remained closed. Angela looked up at Kio and smiled as a tear ran down the length of her face and dripped off the bottom of her chin. Kio smiled back and leaned down. He kissed her on the forehead. “I’ll leave you alone with our child.” Kio said softly and left the room slowly, silently closing the door behind him.



Kio remembered afterwards that Angela had described the process as “shoving a table out of her ass.” Kio always wondered how that would feel but had quickly decided he never really wanted to know or experience that feeling of child birth.

That was fast!

Nothing wrong with that interpretation at all, although I do think you might be a little young for fatherhood .

Maybe spend a little bit of time after you've written something going back over it to see if you can edit it and make it even better.

Well done, anyway (and congratulations).

Yeah..fatherhood isn't really associated with my age group but it was a bit different to my initial thought on what to write about.

Will do, thanks.

WHAH!

Since when have you been 42 !?

since 29 years from now ¬.¬

I think it's safe to say I got quite a chuckle out of this. I have only seen childbirth (or creation as that's what you're writing about (which is a really great idea and I applaud you for originality)) in a movie, and I didn't find anything magical about it. All the tearing and blood and screaming and goo. Maybe I'll feel differently when it's my child ripping through my underparts, but I'm pretty sure I won't. At least not until the child is out.

Anywho, I love how the whole time you're focusing on how he's overjoyed to be watching the birth of his child, and how he doesn't notice the pain his wife is inflicting on him, while she's there lying on the table writhing from the effort of "shoving a table out of her ass."

The comic relief was needed at the end. I was getting sick from reading about torsos coming out of that small place. ^.^

Excellent interpretation of Creation Kio.