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Post  Manintheovercoat Thu Jun 11, 2009 11:15 pm

Holistic membranes
Caustic vibrations
Need to know the name
To find the location
Whispered sweetly
Without pause
I swept up a storm
A violent clause
On the paper
The contract
As I rolled it
Fluid motions
The stove-top all lit
Ready and willing
Sticky FlamesNext time it's noIf I can keep sane
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Post  Sheakhan Tue Jun 16, 2009 3:19 pm

The flow here is excellent. Slamerific.

I'd offer more, but sometimes, simple praise is enough.
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Post  Paradox Mon Sep 21, 2009 4:58 pm

Slamerific is just how I would describe it. I like it.

Also, how does the new guy get the title "Freshly Peeled," and I'm still just a moderator. There is no justice.

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